Sci-Fi Horror Story

"A glimpse of hell" A Sci-Fi- Horror Story

By iamqweenbee

A glimpse of hell

Tabby works on a ship as a maintenance worker. While tending to her duties in the lower part of the ship, she felt the ship's movement turn violent. In the bowels of the ship, she was tossed to and fro.

There was a utility closet with brooms, mops, buckets, thick rope, large chains attached to hooks. This closet had stairs leading to the ship's kitchen. As she quickly raced up the stairs and frantically opened the door leading into the kitchen, she saw the cooks standing there in a debate over dinner specials. She pondered had the cooks felt the ship's scary movements, as she called out to them. For some reason, they could not hear her voice. Tabby called out to them in a louder voice. Still, none heard her.

As she raised her arms in an attempt to get their attention, she felt a tickle on her tummy. She looked down and saw nothing that would cause the tickle. She tried to signal to them again and the same tickle prevented her from getting their attention.

Tabby looked around her and noticed all the things that were kept in the closet. She became adamant about finding this tickling matter. As she pulled back the ropes, she realized she was tangled and was nicely perched on a looping rope that enabled her to see that she had been elevated 70 feet into the air. The closet had disappeared, as all that was left was the doorway to the kitchen and the room where Tabby dangled in mid-air. As she looked down, she saw people in agony, as they were sewn to one another by the arms and legs. Their backs had been melted to the walls by a massive fire, as they struggled to get free. Their heads were wobbling like a dead corpse, as it was the only part of their body that was able to move. Their skin had been burned off by acid blood that was continuously poured on them by beings with steel masks. This room had a stinch of burnt flesh polluting the air.

Tabby vomitted all over the place by this sight. She looked all around the room and saw a chair with a strange, unearthly decor. There was rotten human organs sitting on a plate alongside a goblet of blood. She knew that this chair must belong to someone who keeps a watchful eye on down below, as they feast.

Tabby turned back to try to climb into the kitchen, however, was unable to do so.

Suddenly, a beautiful light shined down on Tabby. With telepathic powers, a force in the light informed Tabby that if she strayed away from God, this will be her damnation.

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Laugh more: tears cloud one's vision.

Say what?  I'd say that Tabby was a cat, and the chain that swung over her was a very real threat.  But as to the rest of that nightmare, I don't find it suspenseful.  Then a jarring turn from the horror scene?

I have seen worse writing, but not often.

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Southern,

Thanks for your post. Did you know this strory is PUBLISHED? So the publisher found it inetersting. Tabby is not a cat in this story, as Tabby is a fictional character. Yes, the chain is linked to a threat. Thanks, again for your post.Smile

 
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I can do all things through Christ

And then She is given wisdom

 
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Fate will not be denied.  Destiny is what you make it.  Never confuse the two.

Qweenbee, I hate to tell you the amount of dreck that gets published.  One sorry example, "The Accidental Tourist" got a Pulitzer.  It was the worst book I ever put back on the library shelf after reading it halfway.  Ghastly! 

Yet I have seen brilliant young men try to break into mainline fiction with action/adventure novels, only to be rejected by feminist indoctrinated man haters with, "It is doubtful that a preschool teacher would put so masculine a work on her library shelves: we must maintain the proper point of view so that children will not develop the lack of values attendant to testosterone poisoning . . .." 

Mainline novels are not intended for a preschool audience, but that is how bitter and mean spirited man hating feminine supremacists all are.  That is why they play their obvious and insulting bitter sexist games.

These are doubtless the very kindest words any feminine supremacist has ever used about any man's work at any time.  It is hellish, ruthless, gender exclusive, and absolutely obvious.

As repellent as the practice was a few years ago, it has gotten lots worse now, and will only result in duller books until no one with writing talent will find the published page: publication will be awarded only on utterly mindless and utterly intense feminine supremacist cult hatred.

 
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Lester,

That's true! We all have different tastes. That book you hate...about 5000 more might love it. That's the ups and downs of the business. LOL
I don't bother by what people say about my stories. If its published, that is what matters most. It was good enough for an EXPERT to publish it.

There is going to be opposition in EVERYTHING we do. Some will agree, some won't! Some will like, some won't! Does that bother me? NO! I just keep writing. LOL! Have a good day and thanks for your post

 
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Your direction,not your intentions,determines your destina

tions. 

It might have made a good episode of the "Twilight Zone", but I doubt it. Let's get back to reality here.Let's post things we can have logical comments on that doesn't have to stray to a religious inuendo.It's more interesting to have a simple debate than having to read someone elses far fetched imigination.I might be dense, but didn't find it too suspenseful. Whoever wrote this and had it published had good luck because I can't understand who would pay for it.My thoughts only.

 
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GOD is 4 U

He's NEVER against U

and Jesus Is Lord!!!

I've tried several times to answer this, have you ever thought of straying away from the horror and write Christian based fictional thrillers instead?  Only, depicting the love of GOD, maybe showing someone where they'll be if they keep denying His free gift of salvation, or the horrible nightmare of a life someone is in, and then they accept Jesus into their life and they undergo a sudden and drastic change for the better.  You're already half way there!  I believe you'd do well, if you'll try!

            P.S.  Tabby does sound like a cat. (lol)

Posted 2009-10-23T05:30:40Z
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A penny saved  is a penny earned

I just run across this post of the silly wabbitt talk calling it a book.Laughing

.Southern...Yedda let me give you a thumbs up , but no others.  I agree with y'll.  Life does not seem to amaze me...What comes out of some people's mouth.

God blessCool

Nanadee 

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